Thanx Hugh, I'll look into the referencing part, and I was told the title needs to be more specific as in asking a question to the problem? rather than a statement? and isn't the title for your PhD is ever changing? or it needs to be specific when you are applying with a proposal?

Hi Eds,

Thank you for looking it through.I do have a summarized version and will post the link below.
And in regards to staying in Kingston I couldn't find any supervisor who can help me on this field, their Design PhDs are more Environmental Design and design sustainability based. I've applied to a few other universities and I was told this may not be a design project instead a social science project? But i thoroughly want to keep it in line within the design discipline. My main motive here is to prepare design undergrads towards a freelancing career as i found there are no taught module here in Uk universities that prepares students into freelancing if the economy struggles and they find it hard to get their first job as a designer.My contribution to the current literature would be a course module that will use my research findings to teach freelancing.

I'm not sure if this will be accepted abroad such as US,Can, Aus as I haven't applied with the current paper.
I figured let me fix it with others feedback on this and go from there.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/faa33dgqua4bwfk/Research%20Proposal-Short.pdf?dl=0

Hi,

I'm struggling to get accepted as a PhD student because of my Research paper. Most of the time I get the feed back that my research isn't sufficient enough for a PhD material. Can anyone give my research topic a read and give me some feedback please? I'm based in UK, London. I have BA(Hons) and MA from Kingston University.

Here is a link to my proposal :
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mhmhl5okqkqobka/Research%20Proposal-Long.pdf?dl=0

Hi,

I'm struggling to get accepted as a PhD student because of my Research paper. Most of the time I get the feed back that my research isn't sufficient enough for a PhD material. Can anyone give my research topic a read and give me some feedback please? I'm based in UK, London. I have BA(Hons) and MA from Kingston University.

Here is a link to my proposal :
https://www.dropbox.com/s/mhmhl5okqkqobka/Research%20Proposal-Long.pdf?dl=0