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My song to Maria

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I've been up all night penning these lyrics, just for you. I hope you like it.

"She moves like she dont care.
Smooth as silk, cool as air.
Ooh, it makes you wanna cry.

She doesnt know your name and your heart beats like a subway train.
Ooh, it makes you wanna die.

Ooh, dont you wanna take her?
Wanna make her all your own?

CHORUS
Maria.
Youve gotta see her!
Go insane and out of your mind.
Medina.
Ave maria.
A million and one candlelights."

I think we should get Blondie to do the tune.

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Thanks DanB, it would be good to see my hardwork rewarded.

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No, I'm sorry I'm disappointed with that song

In comparison to the other poems/songs on here, that didn't live up to its potential

C- must try harder

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