I am applying for a scholarship at Victoria University of Wellington. The guidance for composition of the application letter reads:
"A motivational statement of no more than 500 words, highlighting extra-curricular achievements, 
interest in internationalisation, motivation, why they want to come to Victoria and future goals".
I am from Brazil, and universities here don't usually require application letters (either for positions or scholarships), so I have no experience in the matter. I would appreciate to receive any comments on my draft. Here is a link to it: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qTxQdrHylb4-OP-FyHFaD5OMWz-xm5aOfb1tMRDjIs4/edit?usp=sharing
Thank you in advance for your effort.