thank you very much for precise observations!

here's my revised version, i did some changes according to your answer.

would you please take one last look at it?
thank you

i'll go through it one more time and get back to you with hopefully a better version.

thanks again i really appreciate your answers

thank you for your reply, i'll try to edit out the first part, & from what you said i take it the rest of it is good, it only needs little of bit of tuning, right?!

Hello,
i've just finished writing my motivation/cover letter for a PhD position at a research institution in Irland, and i'd pretty much like an outside perspective to be more confident.
Any suggestions, comments, improvements, critiques, corrections (grammatical errors, or
any misplaced words like 'the' and 'your' here and there) are highly appreciated.
here's the letter :

thank you